My Personal Recount

September 16

1. Remember the structures and characteristics of this type of text.




2. Read the following recount:

Simon Story




One day when I was on holiday with a group of Friends, I went down to the beach at six thirty because I had woken up very early I hadn’t been able to get back to sleep.


It was a beautiful morning. The sun was rising in the sky and the waves were breaking on the shore. A few joggers were running up and down the beach and some fishermen were just coming back from a night’s fishing. It looked absolutely beautiful.


I took a surfboard and paddled out into the bay and then I just laid on my surfboard for a bit thinking about life. I fell asleep. When I woke up and looked around, I got quite a shock because I had drifted a long way from the beach and I couldn’t get back.


I decided to use my mobile phone to get help and then I realised that I had left it back in my room. And that was when I started to feel quite frightened.


My friends found me in the afternoon. They had looked for me all morning and about lunchtime they had become very anxious. They called the air sea rescue service and a helicopter pilot saw me about two hours later.

And the moral of the story? Always tell your friends where you are going and don’t fall asleep on surfboards!
3. According to the recount, Simon Story, answer the following questions:
1. Who was in the experience?
2. What happened?
3. When did it happen?
4. Where did it happen?
5. Why did events happen?
6. How did the narrator change because of this event?

4. Before you write your personal recount, answer the questions above :

1. Who was in the experience?
2. What happened?
3. When did it happen?
4. Where did it happen?
5. Why did events happen?
6. How did the I change because of this event?


4. Following the model of Simon Story, and considering the characteristics and structure of a recount, write your personal recount in the comments space. Remember to write your name.

5. For next class, be prepared to read your classmates' recounts and do peer-correction with the following rubric:




Peer correction activity: Read your classmate’s recount and evaluate it taking into account the following rubric. Analyze each criterion and recognize the problems of the text. Write the specific mistake and try to correct or write a comment about it. Give each criterion a percentage. Being 2.5 points the lowest score and 10 points the highest. Finally, sum up and write the total score. The maximum score is 50 points.

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